Saturday, January 1, 2011

Excerpt for 1/1/11


Inside, James noticed he had been holding Lily’s hand the entire time, and he let go quickly.

“What? No awkward comment?” teased Lily, as the lift doors closed and they began to move upward.

“Your fingernails are purple,” James remarked.

“It’s nail varnish.”

“And you said my fedora was ridiculous.”

“Git.”
“Prig.”


Love,
Jules

10 comments:

  1. Aw, hand holding :)

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  2. That's so completely sweet.

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  3. Well isn't that just too darn adorable? ;-))
    Oh hey, rereading what I call "THE CARLOTTA CHAPTER" and found a Holden Caulfield reference. I'm not sure if you actually Were referring, or if you just like the word but.. :-))

    "No, not exactly. I was—I reckon I was in a bad mood, and you were being phony."

    Happy New Year! Hope it's a good one

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  4. hope we get an update tonight! :)

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  5. It's so fluffy I'm going to dieeeeeeeeeeee

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  6. Aww.... I wish they would just freaking hold hands for good already. But I love them... Any who does that mean no update tonight?

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  7. ADORE.

    Also, @charlieschulz, YES. I noticed that too.

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  8. Sorry, just read the comments from the last post, ignore the last part of my comment

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  9. Do you know what I love most about LaT? The dialogue. It is so funny and witty and natural. That above snippet is the perfect example of that :)

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  10. Aww, the excerpt is so cute! Yay hand holding! :D
    The dialogue is amazing, I agree. I can't wait for the 4th! :)

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